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Note to self: This is to list as many changes and developments as I can remember as I go through the story, and to show that changes are okay. Makes good practice for the real thing. Unfortunately, these are not listed in order. I will get to that later.




  • Switched from IVF to a tragic accident to avoid a paradox with two Garnets, also to make it sound more interesting

  • Inserted the Mystery Girl and secret gem doctor; possibly moving Dr.Rumere (the one that went savage, an unrelated AU) over to this story to be more purposeful.

  • Gems eat food for "aesthetic" and succumbing to human tradition pretty much. Garnet is upset about not being able to celebrate Halloween and eat dinner like she used to.

  • Instead of making the pregnancy happen right then, I switched it (back???) to having the gem develop over a span of 5 years (gestational age?) before the physical form starts appearing (embryonic age?). Therefore, Stevonnie never actually got to meet Garnet.

  • Amethyst develops soft motherly skills by encouraging Garnet to crawl in a kitten form.

  • Garnet grows by going through "reforming" every so often.

  • Peridot putso Stevonnie in charge of informing Garnet on what happened during the pregnancy while she takes notes.

Made OBGYN (is that what it's called???) more sympathetic by having a bossy advisor.

Instead of making them go home then go back to ther hospital again, I just said "screw it, let them stay there for a night or  two.

Garnet is born in a crate
Just ignore this for now 
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